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Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Drama King Jason Grote Talks TV Writing

By Alana Saltz

TV Writer Jason Grote got his start writing for the stage. As a playwright, his work has been produced and developed at Lincoln Center, Sundance, New York Theater Workshop, and more. Through his talents and connections, Jason forged a career for himself in television writing. He has worked as a staff writer on the hit TV series "Smash" and "Mad Men."

We're very lucky to have Jason on our TV Drama panel this Friday at 8 p.m. He will be joined by fellow "Mad Men" writer Michael Saltzman and TV writer/producer William Rabkin ("Monk," "Psych"). Jason is also offering a one day Writing the Television Drama class on May 21st where he'll school you on the essential components of a successful TV drama and help you develop a pitchable idea. And if you're looking to turn that brilliant idea into a script, be sure to check out From Pitch to First Draft with Jason starting June 5th.

Jason was kind enough to answer a few questions about how he broke into TV and what makes a well-written TV drama.

What inspired you to become a TV writer?

I think most playwrights aspire to TV because it's a writer-driven medium and it's possible to make a living.  Also, in the past couple of decades, TV has become exponentially more diverse and interesting, and has by and large outpaced theater in this regard -- almost all of our most exciting dramatists these days are showrunners.  Despite my interest, I never really pursued TV seriously until my son was born and I lost my teaching job. After a harrowing year of unemployment, my first job was "Smash," which came about because I'd known Theresa Rebeck for a long time. 

You worked as a writer on this past season of “Mad Men.” Can you talk a little about how you got involved with the show and what your experience was like writing for a hit TV series? Feel free to share any juicy celebrity stories too.

My staffing was a ridiculous fluke.  I'd been casually working with "Mad Men" producers Andre and Maria Jaquementton on a pilot I wrote. I was in Los Angeles for a week of general meetings, I met them in person, they said they liked my sample better than many of the upper-level submissions they were getting. I took a chance and asked if there was anything I could do to be considered for a staff job. The following day, I was called in to speak to Matthew Weiner, and the day after that I was told I couldn't return to New York because we were starting Monday.  My incredible wife spent the month orchestrating a cross-country move while caring for our toddler son, and now we're here.

No juicy stories, except that the cast and crew are as phenomenal and hardworking as you'd hope. Watching Elizabeth Moss in particular was a delight -- she would make a different choice every take and each one would work.


In addition to television writing, you’re also a playwright. How is writing for the screen different than writing for the stage?

There are positives and negatives to both.  In TV, you're really one voice in a room and your job is to serve the vision of the showrunner, so there's not much of a feeling of authorship.  But it's nice going to work and creating something with other people every day.  In theater, the initial creation of the script is more solitary, but then you're in rehearsal, so that's social too, but the constant travel to regional theaters can sometimes be taxing.  There's also more scarcity in theater, which can sometimes lead to a greater feeling of community but just as frequently leads to a scarcity mentality and everything that goes with that.

Artistically speaking, the stage is much more aural, because you have no camera to guide the eye of the viewer.


What advice do you have for aspiring screenwriters who want to become working TV writers?

Learn how to work with others, and learn how to write well, and fast.  There are sometimes politics in writers' rooms, just like in any office, so be prepared for that.  If you're not good at politics, then you need to be personable and good at what you do.


Give us a little preview of your upcoming Writing Pad classes on writing dramatic TV. What do you think makes a good TV drama?

Just write the sort of thing you like to watch, or read.  I like conflicted protagonists who exist in complicated moral universes.  Sometimes I enjoy formulaic shows, if they're executed with compassion, imagination, and humor, but generally I like stories that feel like they were lived. Don't be afraid to use as much of your life as you can, but also don't be afraid of research.  Executives and showrunners want to see the thing that "only you" can write, so think on what that is.

Can you tell us about your writing practice?

I'm somehow prolific, but I don't know how.  I don't seem to have any discipline or routine, I just write to deadlines.  At the end of it, I wind up with a number of scripts every year, but it's almost like someone else wrote them.

Thanks, Jason! That was fascinating. We can't wait to hear more this Friday at your TV Drama panel!

Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Writing Prompt: Mom When She Was Young

By Marilyn Friedman

I'm so excited about our Major Drama panel this Friday, May 17th with "Mad Men" writers Michael Saltzman, Jason Grote, and Bill Rabkin of "Psych" and "Monk"! I hope you can make it.

By the way, now that it's a little bit too hot, you have even more reasons to come to the Pad in DTLA or Westwood and enjoy our refreshing air conditioning, iced tea and fantastic classes with successful writers.

Starting Monday, June 3, uber screenwriter Robbie Fox ("So I Married An Axe Murderer", "Playing For Keeps", 60 sold projects) starts up a new round of Dream It, Write It, Pitch It: Screenwriting Bootcamp. Robbie will help you create a workable outline and terrific script. He is a great teacher and provides a lot of individual support. Plus, the last class includes a pitch session to an A-list producer. This is a career making class! What are you waiting for, my dears?

Below are the latest class offerings, followed by a free writing prompt.

May/June Events:
 Classes May 15-22:
Other Classes:

Creative Writing/Multi-Genre
Fiction/Memoir
Journalism/Web Writing
Writing For Actors
Screenwriting


Writing Prompt:
Mother's Day was just this past weekend! As I was thinking about my own Mom, I realized how easy it is to forget that our mothers had lives of their own before we were born. For this prompt, make a list of three specific things that describe who your mother was before you were born that made her different than the woman who raised you. Now for 10 minutes, write a scene or story about who your mother when she was young, making sure to include at least one of the specific details. If you want, you can compare her youthful persona to the mother you grew up with.

For instance, my mother (Double D Cup Stalin) was a thin, small-breasted professional singer. She had many suitors. Unfortunately, she had a tragic fall from a train and shattered her kneecap and her life took a very different turn. The mother I knew growing up had ginormous breasts strapped down in a stomach length bra, was built like a linebacker, and instilled fear in all family members with just one angry look. Another example is Betty Draper in "Mad Men." She was a confident model living in New York City before she got pregnant and settled down with Don and became a bitter housewife in the suburbs with weight issues.

Write a scene or story about who your mother was when she was young. Don't forget to share the results of your 10 minute write in the comments of this blog to be entered in the contest for a free class! 

Solving The Mystery of TV: An Interview with William Rabkin

By Alana Saltz
If you want to learn how to break into TV writing, William Rabkin is definitely the man to talk to. He's written and/or produced hundreds of hours of dramatic television for hit shows like "Monk," "Psych," "Spenser: For Hire," and "The Glades." He served as show runner on the long-running Dick Van Dyke mystery series “Diagnosis Murder” and on the action-adventure spectacle “Martial Law.” He's also written and sold a dozen network pilots.

If you want to hear more of William's advice about TV writing, he'll be at our TV Drama panel this Friday night along with Mad Men writers Jason Grote and Michael Saltzman. It's only $5 and includes sangria and snacks. Also, William will be teaching a Writing a Pilot That Can Fly weekend intensive at the Pad starting June 21st! He'll teach you everything you need to know about writing an irresistible series and give you feedback on your idea, outline and pilot to help you bring it to the screen. It is not to be missed.

We recently caught up with him to ask him a few questions about his career and get his insights on the screenwriting life.

You've written for several hit TV series including "Monk" and "Psych." When did you start your screenwriting career and how did you break in?

Really short version: My then-partner and I wrote a spec for "Spenser: For Hire," which the producers bought and shot.

Of course there's a longer version, which includes the usual disappointments and frustrations. (Like, for instance, the year that script sat on the "Spenser" Executive Producer's desk before he opened it.) But really, just about all breaking in stories are the same – you spend what feels like a lifetime writing and fighting to get someone to pay attention to you and it looks like it will never happen, and then some freakish thing works out in exactly the right way and you're through the door.

I understand why people looking to get in tend to focus on the "how did you break in?" question – I know I did – but that's really the wrong part of the equation. Everyone has a different, unique break in moment. . . what we all have in common is the years of writing and the piles of scripts through which we learned our craft. The moment can come at any time and you can't force it, so focus on making sure that when it does, you're ready.

Can you talk about your process for coming up with the intricate cases that the main characters have to solve on "Monk" and "Psych"? Do you use real crimes/cases as inspiration? 
 
Almost never, because any real crime that’s interesting was immediately strip-mined by other shows. During the peak days of procedural-mania, you could see a newspaper headline and know that three months later it would be on at least two "Law and Order" episodes and several other shows, quite possibly in the same week.

My process is different every time. Sometimes it’s a cool puzzle. "Mr. Monk Goes to Mexico" was like that – I’d had the idea for a while of a teaser for something where a skydiver’s chute doesn’t open, but when they scrape his body off the ground they discover he died from drowning in salt water. It took a while to come up with a solution. In the "Psych" books, I usually started with a situation I wanted to put Shawn and Gus in, and designed a murder around that, whether it was stranding them in the mountains or framing them for murder.

You've been a show runner on "Diagnosis Murder" and "Marital Law." What qualities did you look for when hiring staff writers?

The first thing is the writing, of course. You look for a script that is alive. You feel the energy jumping off the page. And you want to keep reading, even if you don’t care about the subject matter. One big part of that is precision. Everything is there for a reason. For example, go check out a British TV movie called "Page Eight" written and directed by playwright David Hare with Bill Nighy and Rachel Weisz. Every word in every line of dialogue is perfect. Every word that wasn’t perfect was removed. I watched this thing with tears in my eyes simply from the beauty of the craft.

The writing gets the writer through the door. Then we meet and sometimes you don’t click with someone and you know familiarity is not going to improve things. You’re looking at spending eight or 10 hours a day in a room with this person for the next few months, and you just can’t do it. Then there are times when you like the writer, but know he won’t be a good fit on your show. I remember when we were staffing "Martial Law," we met a female writer who was brilliant and were eager to hire her. But when she came in she was so shy and quiet, we could barely hear a word she said. I like a noisy room. I like writers shouting out ideas and fighting (nicely!) for what they believe in. But not getting hired on "Martial Law" wasn’t a death blow to her career. Last time I saw her credit she was an executive producer on "House."

Your book "Writing The Pilot" takes you through the process of creating a TV series idea that produces an infinite number of episodes, and then writing a pilot. What are some of the key elements that you think a pilot needs to have to entice TV execs today?

It’s a sad fact that there are very few elements that will entice TV execs today. The biggest is that your script is based on a pre-existing property, ideally a Danish or Israeli series. Another is that you already have shows on three other networks. The TV biz is in flux, and the big networks are running scared. Shows are failing all the time. But if an exec picks up a pilot based on a format that’s already worked somewhere else, or from an EP who has current hits, when the show fails he’s got deniability. It's not his fault. He made all the right decisions.

How does that help a new writer? Obviously, it only makes it harder to get someone interested in your work. Which means more than ever that your pilot needs a voice, a concept, and an execution so fresh and so unique they can’t say no even if logic demands they do. You can’t write another procedural, another lawyer show, another young doctors screwing everything in sight as they save lives show and hope you’ll get picked out of the pile. Look at what’s working: "Sons of Anarchy," "Walking Dead," "Game of Thrones," "Mad Men," "Boardwalk Empire." And then don’t do another one of any of them – do something as revolutionary in its own way as they were in theirs.

You've written five novels. How does fiction writing influence your screenwriting and vice versa?

They’re so different, it’s hard to say. I think it’s like cross training when you’re preparing for a marathon – all your training runs build up the muscles you use to run. The cross training builds up muscles that don’t get used in running, but make you stronger and fitter and ultimately a better runner.

What advice do you have for aspiring TV writers hoping to break into the biz?

There are very few places right now for someone who’s “every bit as good as the people on staff.” There are a lot of professional – and very talented and experienced – writers who are out of work and who want the same jobs you do. If I’m a showrunner choosing between a talented newbie and a talented pro, I’m immediately leaning towards the one I know can deliver on time every time. So you’ve got to be better. You’ve got to have a voice that’s so compelling EP's want to add it to their own. Go look at "Page Eight." You’ve got to be that.

Thank you so much, William, for taking the time to share this helpful advice!

Monday, May 6, 2013

Writing Prompt: Irresistible But Inappropriate Love Interests

By Marilyn Friedman

Spring Break is over so I'm trying to hunker down and write in spite of my never ending pile of work. Last week, I took two essay classes and one memoir class that lit a fire under my bootie. They helped me crank out a new memoir chapter, rewrite an essay and get great feedback on my writing. Hooray!

If you'd like to boost your writing productivity and skills, we have a fantastic assortment of classes starting in the next week or so including Writing And Publishing The Personal Essay with successful journalist Taffy Brodesser-Akner who helped 26 students get published so far, and Fiction Bootcamp with award-winning novelist and short story writer Amelia Gray, the only woman to be nominated for a PEN/Faulkner award this year.

Below are the latest class offerings, followed by a free writing prompt inspired by our "Mad Men" TV Drama panel on Friday, May 17th  and my obsession with Don Draper!

May/June Events:
 Classes Starting May 6-15:
Other Classes:

Creative Writing/Multi-Genre
Fiction/Memoir
Journalism/Web Writing
Writing For Actors
Screenwriting

Writing Prompt:
In honor of our TV Drama panel next Friday featuring "Mad Men" writers Michael Saltzman and Jason Grote and "Monk" and "Psych" writer Bill Rabkin, I was inspired to create this writing prompt. In my 20's, I dated my fair share of Don Draper types. Unfortunately, I have plenty of true life experience to draw from for this writing prompt. I can't wait to hear your stories!

Make a list of three people that you dated that you really shouldn't have (e.g. someone who cheated on you, someone who was unavailable, etc.). Note: You could also make up a fictional character! Pick one of your love interests. Now add a specific detail that made this person irresistible (e.g. his lips tasted like Glen Livet, he dipped me down low to the ground like Fred Astaire, he recited Neruda in bed). Now write about your "Don Draper" type for 10 minutes. Make sure to include that specific detail about him or her that made this person irresistible!

Write about someone that you dated that you shouldn't have. Don't forget to share the results of your 10 minute write in the comments of this blog to be entered in the contest for a free class!

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Writing Prompt: Recurring Dream Images

By Marilyn Friedman and Alana Saltz

We had an awesome YA fiction panel last Friday! In case you missed it, we'll share some of the great advice Francesca Lia Block, Lauren Strasnick, and Robin Benway gave us. They agreed that in order to be successful as an author you need to be tenacious and assured us that everyone has their own unique path to publication. The best thing to do is to keep learning, keep writing, and keep submitting. Yes, ma'am, that's what we're going to do!

Speaking of continuing to write and learn, if you're interested in writing your own YA novel, check out our Character Collage class this Saturday. Award-winning author Sherri L. Smith (5 published YA novels, Washington Post Book of Year, ALA Best Books) helps you define your main characters, put them inharrowing situations, and differentiate your dialogue. You'll walk away with a few stellar scenes and a character bible to guide you in making strong plot choices!

For those of you who want to start with a more bite sized writing project, we have a fantastic Flash Fiction course this Sunday, May 5. Award-winning writer and fab teacher Merrill Feitell (Iowa Award for Short Fiction, Glimmer Train) will help you write a terrific short story in 1000 words or less! There’s a huge market for publishing flash fiction right now.

Meet Alana Saltz, WP Event Manager!
And we don't know about you, but we're really excited for our second Writers With Drinks event tomorrow night (Wednesday) at 8pm at the Blind Barber in Culver City. It's a great chance to make new writer friends and network with editors. The Blind Barber will even be offering literary-themed drink and grilled cheese specials just for us!

Below are the latest class offerings, followed by a free writing prompt! We're giving you one last chance to be entered into the March/April contest for a free class. What are you waiting for?


April/May Events:
 Classes Starting May 1 -6:
Other Classes:

Creative Writing/Multi-Genre
Fiction/Memoir
Journalism/Web Writing
Writing For Actors
Screenwriting

What image shows up in your dreams? A phone sandwich?


Writing Prompt:
Dreams can be a great source of inspiration for your writing. Often, something in a dream can spark an idea for a character, a plot, or even a piece of flash fiction. In honor of our classes this weekend, we're going to help you get started on an idea for your next YA novel or short story.

Make a list of three recurring dream images you have (e.g. a door that is too small for its frame, being on stage in your underwear). Pick one. Now add a sensory detail (smell, taste, sound, touch). Now write for 10 minutes. Start by describing the image and then go into your dream or the dream of your character and make sure to use that sensory detail!

Both Alana and I both have the same recurring dream where we're trying to make a phone call, but something goes wrong, and we can't dial the number. Sometimes the phone doesn't have a keypad, or sometimes we can't get the right numbers to come up. Alana even once had a dream where she tried to make a phone call on a piece of bread. So that's what's she's going to write about!

Write about a recurring dream you've had. Don't forget to share the results of your 10 minute write in the comments of this blog to be entered in the contest for a free class! This is your last chance to enter the March/April contest, and you have until midnight tonight to submit your response. Good luck!

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Writing Prompt: Stupid Things You Did As A Teen

By Marilyn Friedman

It was so busy at Writing Pad last week! On Thursday night, we had a full house at our Short Story Panel with Ben Loory, Mary Otis, and Amelia Gray. It was such an inspiring event! One of my favorite moments was when Ben Loory said that when he submits a story for publication, he tries to remind himself that a rejection letter only means that he's one step closer to getting published. I really admire his positive attitude and will try to remember that when sending out my own work. I'm not going to lie. It's going to be tough!

On Friday, Brian Finkelstein, Courtney Kocak, Juanita Mantz, Kris Crenwledge, and Molly Fite rocked the house at our Storytelling Essay Showcase. Their essays were so funny and moving! What is that I hear? My dear, there's no need to be jealous that you weren't the one dazzling the audience last Friday! You too can learn how to craft a gripping story and perform it flawlessly without notes next Thurs., May 2nd with Brian at Storytelling Bootcamp. He'll teach you how to improv like a pro, have spot-on timing, and seamlessly weave in callbacks while unearthing a new story that you didn't even know was there. Soon, you'll impress even the crankiest judges at The Moth. The last section of this class sold out--so hurry!

Then on Saturday, I got a really bad cold so I missed the LA Times Book Fair and most of the luxurious weekend of writing I'd planned for myself. Boo! But I'm finally recovered after a lot of soup, tea and rest.

Now that I've returned to the land of the fully functioning, I want to invite you to join me this Friday night at Growing Up, Finding Love, Letting Go: Exploring The YA Novel. This event features successful YA novelists Francesca Lia Block (30+ published YA novels incl. “Dangerous Angels” series), Lauren Strasnick (“Nothing Like You”, ALA Quick Pick), Robin Benway (“The Extraordinary Secrets of April, May & June”, Publisher Weekly’s Starred Reviews), and will be moderated by award-winning children's book writer Antonio Sacre ("My Name Is Cool", CA Readers Book Collections for School Libraries).

Award-winning novelist Francesca Lia Block
Learn how to create believable tales of teenage angst loved by readers of all ages! YA is the hot new genre so it's worth revisiting those painful teenage memories. Besides, the event is only $5 and includes snacks and sangria. The writing prompt at the bottom of this post is inspired by this event.

Below are the latest class offerings, followed by a free writing prompt! It's the last prompt of the month so share a story to be entered into the March/April contest for a free class.

April/May Events:
 Classes Starting May 1 -6:
Emmy-nominated writer and Moth host Brian Finkelstein

Other Classes:

Creative Writing/Multi-Genre
Fiction/Memoir
Journalism/Web Writing
Writing For Actors
Screenwriting



Writing Prompt:
In honor of our young adult fiction literary panel coming up this week, I wanted to help you to start channeling your inner teenager. Make a list of three stupid things you did as a teenager or kid (or that your fictional character did). Pick one. Now include a sensory detail (e.g. smell, taste, sound, touch). Now write about the stupid thing you did for 10 minutes, making sure to include the sensory detail.

I grew up in a really strict household so I was pretty much a goody two shoes, but I did once take my mother's precious Chrysler Le Baron without her permission to have lunch with a friend. I landed myself in huge trouble because I got caught. How? I overheated the car and was about an hour late picking my Mom up at work. I couldn't call her because this was before the age of cell phones. She was livid. What did you do that you wish you hadn't?

Tell us about a time you did something stupid as a teen or kid. Don't forget to share the results of your 10 minute write in the comments of this blog to be entered in the contest for a free class! It's the last prompt for the March/April comment contest!

Monday, April 15, 2013

Writing Prompt: Errbody's Getting Tipsy!

By Marilyn Friedman

Thank you to everyone who came out to Writers With Drinks at Tony's Downtown Saloon last Tuesday night! Libations and conversation flowed freely, and it was a smashing success. In fact, today's writing prompt (at the bottom of the post) was inspired by our recent soiree.

If you're looking for more literary inspiration, be sure to check out Writing Pad's short story panel this Thursday, April 18th from 8pm to 9:30 pm, Strange, Comic, Beautiful, and Sad: Reinventing the Short Story with award-winning authors Ben Loory (New Yorker, Best American Short Stories), Mary Otis (Tin House, Best American Short Stories), and Amelia Gray (McSweeney’s, Ronald Sukenick Innovative Fiction Prize). Learn how to create powerful tales that linger in your readers’ mind and get advice on how to publish both short fiction and story collections. Hope you can join us. It's only $5 and includes snacks and sangria!

And we just added a few new classes to kick off your May writing practice. Do you have a great idea for a memoir? Let bestselling author Brett Paesel show you how to transform your real life stories into lively drama in True Tales: Writing A Compelling Past on Sat., May 4th. Or are you dying to get an essay published in a magazine or newspaper? On Sun., May 5th published essayist Annabelle Gurwitch (More, Marie Claire) will help you to push an essay to the finish line in Personal Essay Punch Up. She'll help you uncover opportunities in your writing and reach surprising revelations. Her feedback and editing methods will blow your mind!

Below are the latest class offerings, followed by a free writing prompt!

April/May Events:
Creative Writing/Multi-Genre
Fiction/Memoir
Journalism/Web Writing
Writing For Actors
Screenwriting


Writing Prompt:
Sometimes buzzed turns tipsy turns seriously drunk and that's when all bets are off. Write about the first time you or a character got drunk (or a memorable time you got drunk). Before you set off to write:
1. Write down two details about your experience that will show us that your character is drunk (e.g. the room was spinning, all of a sudden, my cheek was on the cold tile floor).
2. Write down a sensory detail that was part of the experience (e.g. smell, taste, sound, touch)

Now write for 10 minutes about this experience without explicitly telling us that your character is drunk. Show us that he or she is drunk by the things he or she is feeling or seeing. Make sure to include a sensory detail (e.g. smell, taste, sound, touch).  

Tell us about your (or a character's) first experience with inebriation. Don't forget to share the results of your 10 minute write in the comments of this blog to be entered in the contest for a free class!